Hi there! We've taken a look at your application, and while there is some wonderful potential, we would like to ask for a REVISION. If you choose to revise, please reply to this thread with the revision within 72 hours.
The reason for the revision request is while we find the application over all strong, the app team would like to see an expansion on personality, as to the more positive ascepts of his personality. What makes him happy? Is he empathic?
If it is possible to explain the fear of the vampire taking over, or if it was an incomplete sentence, please complete it.
We apologize for the inconvenience, and thank you so much for applying.
REVISE!
The reason for the revision request is while we find the application over all strong, the app team would like to see an expansion on personality, as to the more positive ascepts of his personality. What makes him happy? Is he empathic?
If it is possible to explain the fear of the vampire taking over, or if it was an incomplete sentence, please complete it.
We apologize for the inconvenience, and thank you so much for applying.