Hi there! We've taken a look at your application, and while there is some wonderful potential, we would like to ask for a REVISION. If you choose to revise, please reply to this thread within 72 hours.

The reason for the revision request is because we would like some expansion on the personality and the third person sample. We would like to see more about his time in the hospital, the aliens, as well as his struggles with his identity, if at all possible.

We apologize for the inconvenience, and thank you so much for applying.